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September 30, 2004

Working on the final version...

Last week, we wrote a final version of the draft and uploaded it to the web page. Now, having received the feedback and other comments on our draft, we, as a group, are trying to eliminate ,or at least, minimize the errors of the paper. We are having problems with the organization of the paper which I believe is a result of our initial strategy; dividing the text into three and charging each group member to write the analysis of each part. Since the final paper is a combination of our individual works, we have repetitions and some kind of disorganization in the paper which I hope that we'll manage to minimize before submitting in the final version.
I think that we are doing fine so far and we deserve a nice result in turn of the efforts we have put. The only thing we need to do with the paper is to put alittle bit make-up in order to solve the problems...

Posted by halil on September 30, 2004 08:36 PM

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