September 30, 2004

Working on the final version...

Last week, we wrote a final version of the draft and uploaded it to the web page. Now, having received the feedback and other comments on our draft, we, as a group, are trying to eliminate ,or at least, minimize the errors of the paper. We are having problems with the organization of the paper which I believe is a result of our initial strategy; dividing the text into three and charging each group member to write the analysis of each part. Since the final paper is a combination of our individual works, we have repetitions and some kind of disorganization in the paper which I hope that we'll manage to minimize before submitting in the final version.
I think that we are doing fine so far and we deserve a nice result in turn of the efforts we have put. The only thing we need to do with the paper is to put alittle bit make-up in order to solve the problems...

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September 28, 2004

Draft revised after feedback... (1)

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September 23, 2004

First Draft (fear sells...)

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September 20, 2004

halil (draft)

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September 18, 2004

Rhetoric and Me...

To be honest; after the first class I even thought about dropping rhetoric. Because the assignments we were supposed to do sounded horrible. I would have to spend most of my time on a course which has the least relevancy with my major. Besides, as well as being a non-native speaker, I'm not very good at writing at all. With these in mind; deciding not to drop this class was something really difficult for me because I had no idea of what the expected level of assignments was. But now, after 3 weeks, I'm glad with my decision. I'm aware that I have just strated a journey which seems to be really arduous but what I learned so far in my life shows me that you have to force yourself to "expand" your limits. I'll try my best and then the result will be more than just a grade; it'll remind me my courage and determination to enhance my skills. I know that I am doing something that I will be proud of once after it is completed...

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September 17, 2004

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September 13, 2004

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