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November 15, 2004

final draft of paper 3

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So again, I put in a lot of effort. I truncated the ending of my first draft because it was completel unnecessary. I also made all the revisions that were recommended and checked for others and reworded somethings. I really aimed to be persuasive but I may have ben a little too mechanical. Since the paper was on Los Alamos (which I have gotten very used to typing), it was a little technical. I hope it is not too technical. But I feel the paper will provide good start on informing anyone who reads it on Los Alamos. Now my group need to decide what we will research and begin the fourth paper, which if good enough and depending on the topic I might actually try to use, i.e. sed it the person or group who could do something about it.

Posted by kjh323 on November 15, 2004 02:47 AM

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Hey dude

I've submitted the topic proposal (it's in my blog) for the last assignment but i was the only one who showed up in our group. so just read it and if you guys wanna change, then we can change it till wednesday...

C'ya

Halil

Posted by: Halil SAKA on November 15, 2004 01:40 PM