December 07, 2004
Last words for this class
After going through most of the semester, I was able to see more clearly what were some of the things in my earlier papers that needed improvement. I was supprised at myself after reading my initial submission on the paper about electric cars. I couldn't believe that after more than 30 hours of writing the paper, what seemed so structured and ironclad now seem so sloppy. I have learned alot in this class, more than I thought I would. I guess my main problem is that I cannot see both the big picture and the detials of things I write until it is too late. Hopefully that won't hurt me in the future writings for other classes. Well, time to study for the finals, good bye...
Posted by Tao at 08:40 PM | Comments (0)
December 03, 2004
Last week
This week has been very fast paced mainly because many classes are having their materials and alot of papers and homeworks, aswell as quizzes and tests are here. Our group will get together Friday to disscuss any changes that will be made to the draft of our last paper. It seems that we have covered most of the important points in the draft, but could improve in places like explain a little more on how we can convince the government in solving the educational budget issue. As far as my paper about electric cars goes, I am beginning to see what my main problem is. It will be easy to fix the obvious mistakes like the correct MLA format and quotings, but to be able to effectively using massive amounts of information that was in the paper and directly link them to support my ideas will take some time to think about. I can't think in an clear and concise manner so it usually takes me an hour or so to just come up with a few sentences...
Posted by Tao at 01:40 AM | Comments (0)